Date Reviewed: Dec. 01, 2005
Project: Kid's Homepage
Creator: Sunjung Lee
URL: http://www.arches.uga.edu/~sunjung/studiotemplate-no_frames/intro.htm

Hey Sunjung,

Thanks for your feedback. I am still working on my project and will revised it based on your and others' suggestions. Again, thanks. :)

As for your project, I love it because the layout looks neat and cute. Yes, CUTE~ that's the point and I think your design is definitely for kids and is sure to lure them into browsing!!

Ok, here are some things I saw when I looked at it:

1. I still cannot see the picture on the welcome page (I remember that's a flash, right?). Probably you need to figure out how to fix it so that users can see it.

2. For me, the font size of the welcome words ("Hi, please come on in") seems a little bit small. You might need to make it bigger so that it will get the users attention (esp. the kids) to know they can click there to go into your website.

3. In the welcome page, there is a little bird on the airplane (actually I am not sure whether it is a bird or not so I presume it is! :) ). I notice you add a link and think if I click it, it would enter into your homepage. But in fact it gets me nowhere. Probably you need to check it out and see if you would like to revise or remove the link.

That's all I see for now. I know everything is still going on but it is going great. I look forward to seeing your finalized product.

Chia-Ying

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Date Reviewed: Dec. 02, 2005
Project: Art Therapy
Creator: Jung Eun Shim
URL: http://www.arches.uga.edu/~shim/edit6190/art_therapy_index.htm

Hey Jung Eun,

Your project looks really great! I like the color scheme very much. I know you're still working on it but I believe it will turn out to be a wonderful, fantastic website.

I have only one comment: On your introduction page, probably because of the font, the colors of font, and the colors of background, it is not as easy to read at the first glance as I expected. Using a neat font or change its colors may help to increase the contrast between words and the background. This might make the subtitle notable and readable.

Ok, that's all I see for now. I look forward to seeing your final product.

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Date Reviewed: Dec. 04, 2005
Project: CES 3rd Grade Team Webpage
Creator: Elizabeth Foster
URL: http://www.arches.uga.edu/~efoster3/edit6190project/teamhomepage.htm

Dear Elizabeth,

Thank you so much for showing me your website and give me some useful instructional information about my project.

As for your project, I think you did a great job. I particularly like the color scheme you choose and webpage frame you design for the main page. It's user-friendly and looks neat. I have only one suggestion for you: On your “Great Books” page, it is not as easy to read at the first glance as I expected. Making the size of the font bigger and using the bullets to list the books might make this page easier to read. :) ~That's all I see for now. I look forward to seeing your finalized product.

Chia-Ying

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Date Reviewed: Dec. 04, 2005
Project: Got Social Skills?
Creator: Leigh Davis
URL: http://www.arches.uga.edu/%7Eleighed/skillshome.htm

Dear Leigh,

I revisit your website and find it is going great!! I like the vivid colors of Legos you design. They are sure to attract the attention of your students. You also draw the visuals to aid with users (your students) to browse the page. I think your website is really user-friendly! There is only one thing I would like to say when I looked at it: the description under the three visuals on top of the main page says, “Click on the skill you want to learn”. At first sight I thought it means I could click on one of the visuals to learn something. But apparently it doesn't work in the way as I thought. Finally I realized probably they are just legends. Anyhow, I am not sure for what function of these visuals really is, so you might need to check them out and see whether it is necessary to give some detailed description about them.

That's all I see for now. I know you are still working on your project and I believe it will turn out to be a wonderful website. I look forward to seeing your finalized product.

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